Dangerous Play

Thirteen-year-old twins Ryan and Chris Taylor are visiting Kansas State University during homecoming week because their parents used to attend the university, and the boys are looking forward to getting their first look at life on a college campus. They’re also looking forward to the big football game. At least, Chris is looking forward to the game. Ryan isn’t as athletic and doesn’t see the appeal of sports as much as Chris does. Ryan is more studious. However, both of the boys are hoping to meet Trent Dasher, the star quarterback on the Kansas State football team. Chris wants to ask him for sports advice, and Ryan is hoping to get some pictures of him for their school’s newspaper. Meanwhile, their parents are looking forward to reliving their college years. They met in college, and they spent their honeymoon at the same hotel where they are now staying with the boys.

The twins go in search of Trent Dasher. They contacted him before arriving, so he should be expecting them, but they discover that he is missing. When they go to his dorm room, his roommate doesn’t know where he is. Then, the boys overhear a conversation between Coach Butler and Dean Murray in the athletic offices, in which the coach says that Trent has been behaving oddly recently, and now, he can’t find him. The twins ask Trent’s roommate, Danny, for more information about Trent and if he knows anything about where he might be. Danny says that he and Trent don’t really confide in each other. Even though they’re sharing a dorm room, they’re both pretty busy with their own activities. Danny has noticed that Trent has been unusually nervous recently and that he’s missed some classes, which is out of character for him. Danny suggests that they look for Trent at the Wildcats’ Lair, a snack bar in the University Union where Trent likes to hang out.

Before they leave Trent’s dorm room, the boys sneak a look at Trent’s belongings, and they learn a few things about him. Trent has a girlfriend named Jeannie who lives in their town and has written letters to him. He’s also in danger of failing his chemistry class if he doesn’t get some extra help, and if he fails chemistry, he could lose his scholarship. The boys figured that his problems with his classwork and the threat of losing his scholarship are probably what was worrying him so much.

When the boys go to check out the Wildcats’ Lair, they meet a girl who says that she’s Trent’s girlfriend. Unfortunately, she isn’t Jeannie. When the boys address her as Jeannie, assuming that she’s the one who wrote the letters, she says that’s not her and gets angry. The twins are embarrassing, thinking that they might have just accidentally created a new problem for Trent by complicating his love life.

The boys finally locate Trent talking to a tutor called Wilson about getting help to pass his chemistry exam. It seems like the mystery of the missing athlete is over, but then, Wilson tells Trent that the way he “helps” students is by selling them the test answers. Trent gets angry and refuses to cheat. The boys try approaching Trent, but he doesn’t want to talk to them because he has too much on his mind.

The twins are a little offended at being brushed off by Trent since he knew they were coming and had agreed to meet them, but they can also see that Trent is in trouble and could use some help. They decide to go after him, and they hear him talking to someone on the phone about a special “deal.” Since they just heard him turn down an opportunity to cheat by purchasing test answers, what kind of “deal” is he looking into to solve his problems?

The boys follow Trent and see him meeting with Coach Hatfield from Flint Hills University, Kansas State’s rival. It seems that Coach Hatfield has made Trent an offer to come play for their team, or at least, that’s how Trent interpreted his offer. With his scholarship to Kansas State in danger, Trent is considering the possibility of switching schools. However, it turns out that Coach Hatfield wants something very different. He wants to bribe Trent to throw the upcoming homecoming game and make sure his team loses! He says that he’ll make sure that Trent has enough money for his tuition if he does. Trent is appalled and refuses.

The twins continue to follow Trent as he goes to talk to his girlfriend, Cindi, who is the girl they met earlier. She asks him about Jeannie, but Jeannie is just a high school girl from his home town who has an unrequited crush on him. He’s really serious about Cindi. Trent tells Cindi everything about the troubles he’s been having and the unethical offers he’s had. She asks him why he hasn’t gotten help from the legitimate tutors or from his professor, but he says that the chemistry tutor quit and hasn’t been replaced yet and that his professor seems to have a prejudice against athletes. Trent is thinking that maybe he should just quit college and get a construction job so that he and Cindi can get married, but Cindi doesn’t think that’s a good idea.

Even if Cindi can help Trent find a solution to his problems in chemistry, Trent’s football problems are just beginning. He turned down Coach Hatfield’s proposition, but the Flint Hills football team isn’t going to take no for an answer. They’re prepared to use violence to make sure that the upcoming football game goes their way. Chris and Ryan witness some of them kidnapping Trent! They’ve got to get help and prove that Trent is in trouble to save him!

The book is available to borrow and read for free online through Internet Archive.

There wasn’t really much mystery to the story, which was a disappointment to me. The boys figure out where Trent is and directly witness his kidnapping, so there’s nothing really for them to figure out. It’s more about how they manage to rescue him. It’s more of an adventure story than a mystery. Part of the premise of this series is also that the twins have a kind of psychic connection and can sense each other’s thoughts, but that didn’t really enter into this particular story. The resolution of the situation didn’t depend on them having this ability, and for most of the story, the twins just talk to each other openly about everything without a need to communicate anything silently.

Things turn out okay in the end because Trent is able to make it to the football game and help his team win. The book doesn’t mention any of them going to the police about the coach and football team participating in an actual kidnapping, which made me feel a little weird. It’s great that the boys were able to rescue Trent and that he was able to win the football game honestly. Trent never compromises his values, in spite of the pressure he’s experiencing from all sides, and in the end, there’s an honest solution to his problems with his grades, but still, kidnapping is a serious crime, and I thought that there should have been serious consequences to go with it.

As for Trent’s troubles with chemistry, it turns out that his chemistry professor is actually an old friend of the boys’ parents, and he isn’t really against athletes. The only reason why he hasn’t noticed Trent failing and helped him to get the extra tutoring he needs is that, at a large university, classes are made up of hundreds of students, and professors rely on graduate assistants to help manage the grading. The professor doesn’t know that much about how individual students are doing. They mainly help when students approach them for help, which Trent hasn’t done. When the twins explains Trent’s problems to the professor, the professor talks to Trent, telling him that he should have come to him earlier and that he will help him improve his grades, not because he’s a star athlete but because he’s a student in need of help to complete his degree.

Although I wasn’t thrilled by the mystery itself because it wasn’t much of a mystery, there are some interesting points in this story about both prejudices people have about athletes and the system of success/failure at universities. First, the prejudice part is an obvious one. Many people assume that people are either smart and good at studying or that they’re not smart and that’s why they’re mainly good at sports – like life’s options are brain vs. brawn, with no in-between. The twins themselves represent this notion because Ryan is the studious one and Chris is the athletic one. This seems to be how other people think of them and how they think of themselves. 

Ryan in particular has this view. He’s good in school subjects, better than his brother, but not that good at sports and has no interest in sports. Chris is offended that his brother seems to think that his athletic prowess also makes him the dumber twin and that Ryan is often telling him that he needs to read more and study more or he’s not going to make it in college. Chris argues with Ryan and tells him that just because he’s into sports and not as good at studying as Ryan is doesn’t mean that he can’t manage. Ryan is correct that a student athlete can’t just be all about sports and neglect his school work, as Trent’s situation indicates, but he does underrate the athletes’ abilities to manage and think their way through problems. The boys also have some prejudices against girls, with Ryan particularly thinking of cheerleaders as being brainless, but Cindi, who is also a college cheerleader, comes through for them and helps to rescue her boyfriend. I didn’t like the way the boys talked about girls in the story, but Cindi’s role helps to highlight that theme of underestimating people and their abilities.

Success and failure are major themes in the story. Trent is a successful athlete, and generally, a pretty good student, apparently. However, the failure of one single class could endanger his scholarship and end his entire university career. As the chemistry professor points out later, it’s not just a matter of Trent losing his scholarship because of failing that class; this is a class that is required to complete his degree. We don’t actually know what Trent’s major is, but he apparently needs to understand at least some chemistry for it. Failure of this particular class is just not an option. A student whose scholarship was assured or who had other resources for paying for their education could simply retake a failed class and try to pass the next time, but there’s pressure for Trent because he really relies on his scholarship. Without it, there won’t be a next time for him. What the story points out is that it’s not just Trent’s failure but also the system’s failure. Professors with hundreds of students, and also the pressure of having to do their own researching, writing, and publishing on the side, just can’t keep up with every individual student and give them all the support they need. They rely on graduate assistants and tutors to fill in the gaps and provide that support. Trent falls through the cracks because the chemistry tutor left and hasn’t been replaced yet, and he was reluctant to talk to his professor about it. His lesson is one about how the university system functions and his need to go to his professor about his problems to get the help he needs.

It turns out that Trent isn’t the only one whose future hangs by a thread because of one possible failure. The reason why Coach Hatfield and his players are so desperate to win this upcoming football game is that Coach Hatfield will be fired if they don’t. The Flint Hills football players are desperate to save their coach. They see it as loyalty and as avoiding having to get a new coach that they won’t like as well, but that doesn’t justify engaging in a serious crime to accomplish their goals. In real life, they would be endangering their own futures by pulling this kidnapping stunt. The fact that the coach is willing to go along with such a thing may be a sign of why his career has reached this desperate point in the first place. It might not be just that he’s been unable to deliver the football victories that his university wants but that he also engages in reckless, irresponsible, and unethical behavior. At the very least, we know that he is likely to lose his job because his team lost the football game, but I still think that there are serious legal consequences for his actions.

Honesty and Plagiarism

I want to talk about the subjects of honesty and plagiarism because a site that just liked one of my posts and now wants to follow my blog has made me aware that we need to have this discussion. It’s very nice that you just liked a post of mine, but the feeling isn’t mutual.

I don’t want to mention this site’s name or provide a link to it, but I want to explain that this is one of those businesses that sells essays to students so that they don’t have to write their own. Whether or not this type of business is allowed to operate isn’t my decision, but I don’t support it. This isn’t the kind of attention I want or the type of friends I really want to have.

I describe the plots of many vintage children’s books, including some that are used in schools, but I’m not doing this so that students can avoid doing their own work, or worse, trying to claim credit for work done by someone else. (Hint: I say a lot about what goes on in these stories, but I haven’t told you how much I’m not saying. There are always details of these stories that you won’t find in my reviews, and teachers will know what I’ve left out.) If a child (or adult college student) learns nothing else from their education, it should be that they, and they alone, are responsible for their own work. Accepting responsibility is part of adulthood, and the sooner you get used to it, the better. A person who copies the ideas and opinions of someone else or pays someone else to come up with ideas for them is either a person who has no ideas or opinions of their own or lacks the ability or guts to say them. I’ve been a busy college student myself, with honors classes and a job, but no matter how busy I was, I never lacked the time to do what I knew I needed to do, show what I learned because I really did learn things, and share my own thoughts about it all because I always had plenty of thoughts to share. People make time for what’s important to them, and if thinking and doing work aren’t important, it says a lot about your character. A student who can’t or doesn’t want to do these things might want to take some time to consider why they’re in school in the first place, especially at the college level.

College requires an enormous amount of time and money, and one of the main purposes behind it is to open your mind to new ideas and broader aspects of life and the rest of the world. It’s ironic, when you consider that was one of the main themes of Daddy-Long-Legs, and I discussed that in my post, the very post that this essay-selling business liked. I strongly suspect that, just like their clients don’t want to do their own reading or homework, this site didn’t do its reading or homework when it picked which post to like. Probably, they just picked up on the “college” keyword in that post and didn’t read any further than that. I can’t say that I’m really surprised. But, that being the case, they’re probably too lazy to read the rest of what I have to say about this as well. That’s not going to stop me from saying it.

Not taking a full part in the classes that make up college life is a lot like paying for tickets to a concert just to get your hand stamped at the door when you know that you’re not going to stay to listen to the music. All of the monetary investment, a portion of the time investment, and none of the benefit from doing any of it. Sure, you can gain some time by paying someone to do your work for you and maybe a fancy piece of paper that says you did well when you didn’t (assuming that you can pull it off), but your favorite essay-writing business isn’t going to be there for you when you’re out in the real world. You can’t always pay someone to do all your work or your thinking for you, and there are often some solid reasons not to. People don’t have much respect for someone who can’t handle their own work or do their own thinking, and these people aren’t doing you any favors. At some point, you need to face the music.

There’s also the question of stealing. Plagiarism is basically stealing someone else’s thoughts and ideas, and not having any of your own isn’t much of an excuse for doing that. When you use someone else’s words or ideas without giving them credit, it’s a form of theft because you have taken something that didn’t belong to you, something made by another person through their time and effort.

It takes me a long time to read all of these books and write about them, and I do it because I enjoy discussing them (and because I’m studying web design and wanted an excuse to set up a new website on a topic that I knew I could discuss so I could play with the features of WordPress). I am not being paid to do this, by anyone. I have not made any money off it. I want to make it clear that no one should be making a profit off of my words here by selling them to anyone else or reprinting them under someone else’s name. I have not sold any of my words, reviews, or essays to anyone. I have not given anyone permission to use my reviews in their name. I will never grant permission to anyone to use these reviews under someone else’s name, and I am not interested in selling them for that purpose.

I don’t mind if people cite my reviews in other book discussions on other blogs, and I allow reblogs of some of my posts for that purpose. I often link to other people’s work to provide more information about certain topics, and I expect links to my work now and then by others who are discussing the same topics. I like people giving me suggestions for books to review, but the reviews themselves are still all mine. I would resent anyone who attempted to claim credit for my work, whether they made a profit from it or not.

I would also like to point out that copying my reviews in an attempt to get out of class book reports would also not be very smart. Finding my reviews isn’t that hard because that’s what I’ve been aiming for all along. The best web designers want people to see their work, as many people as possible. Anyone who can see the WordPress Reader can see my work, which is how this essay-writing business found me in the first place. My posts also show up in Google search results, and some of them are among the first that show up for certain books. I’ve been studying SEO as part of my web design studies, and I have further plans to improve my standing in search results. Remember, this site was built for the purposes of experimentation, and I’m always making improvements so that I can show off what I’ve been learning. If you didn’t think of that, understand that I did. I’m not the kind of person who pays someone else to think for me, and I know how to actually do my own work. Know who else can do that? Any teacher who knows how to put a phrase or sentence into Google and see what comes up. I’m making it as easy for them to find me as possible. I’ll be sure to say hi if your teacher contacts me, and I would be happy to discuss all of this with him/her honestly.

Addition: So, the essay writing service keeps trying to follow this blog. I’ve kicked off the follow three times already, and it’s only been two days. Sigh. I think this is my life now. Not only that, but this idiot can’t even spell his own name right. What kind of fool sells writing for a living and can’t even spell his own stupid name? Actually, a better question is, what kind of fool pays someone for writing when that person can’t even spell his own stupid name?

Maybe some questions answer themselves.

Cranberry Autumn

CranberryAutumnCranberry Autumn by Wende and Harry Devlin, 1993.

CranberryAutumnPic1School is about to start, and Maggie and her grandmother realize that they’re short of money.  Maggie needs new school clothes, and her grandmother needs a new coat.  They know that some of their neighbors could also use some more money, so Grandmother suggests that they hold a sale.  Some of them have some antiques and other interesting old items that they could sell.

Mr. Whiskers tries to help, but he doesn’t have anything really interesting to sell.  At least, nothing Grandmother thinks that anyone would buy.  He’s disappointed because he really wants to help.

Mr. Grape, a greedy and dishonest neighbor of Mr. Whiskers, attends the sale and decides that he wants a pair of beautiful antique Staffordshire china dogs that Grandmother is hoping to sell for $200.  When he devises a scheme to cheat Grandmother and get the dogs for much less money, Mr. Whiskers gets his chance to help and to turn the tables on Mr. Grape.

As with other Cranberry books, this one includes a recipe that uses cranberries: Cranberry Squares.

CranberryAutumnPic2

CranberryAutumnRecipe

The Candy Corn Contest

The Kids of the Polk Street School

CandyCornContest#3 The Candy Corn Contest by Patricia Reilly Giff, 1984.

As Ms. Rooney’s class prepares for the upcoming Thanksgiving holiday, she gives them a contest: students can win the jar of candy corn on her desk if they can guess how many pieces of candy corn are in it (or get the closest to the right answer).  Richard “Beast” Best wants to win very badly because he loves candy corn and his mother never lets him eat many sweets at home.

The only problem is that students can only earn the ability to make guesses by reading books.  They get one guess for each page they read.  Richard has always been a slow reader, so he knows that this contest is going to be hard for him.  One day, while studying the jar of candy corn, trying to plan out his guess to make the best use of it he can, Richard gives in to temptation and eats three pieces.  Now, he doesn’t know what to do.  Ms. Rooney knows exactly how many pieces of candy there were in the jar, and if three are missing, she’ll find out.

CandyCornContestPic2While Richard is worrying over his mistake, he’s also worrying about the sleep-over party his parents are letting him have over the Thanksgiving break.  At first, he was looking forward to it, but some of the other boys in class can’t come and some of those who said they could are concerned because Matthew is coming.  Matthew and Richard are friends, and people in class generally like Matthew, but everyone knows that Matthew still wets the bed.  Some of the other boys are worried that they’ll have to sleep next to Matthew at the sleep-over.  As much as Richard likes Matthew, it feels like his problem is going to ruin the party, and when Matthew is nice to him, it only makes Richard feel worse.

For awhile, Richard is short-tempered with Matthew and says some things that he later regrets.  His mean comments make Matthew decide not to go to his party, but Richard feels terrible because he realizes what Matthew’s friendship really means to him. Richard’s apologies later help to fix the situation.  It also helps that Richard admits to Matthew that he ate three pieces of the candy corn.  Richard’s confession that he did something wrong (more than one thing, actually) and that he wants to fix it helps Matthew to forgive him.  Matthew helps Richard to decide how to solve his candy corn problem honorably, and Matthew’s mother gives Matthew a suggestion that will help him to avoid problems at the sleep-over.

The book is currently available online through Internet Archive.

Something Queer in Rock ‘n’ Roll

SQRock

Something Queer in Rock ‘n’ Roll by Elizabeth Levy, illustrated by Mordicai Gerstein, 1987.

SQRockPic1Gwen and Jill join a couple of other friends in forming a rock band.  They want to enter a rock contest run by a local tv station.  In order to enter, they have to have an original rock song, so they write one about Jill’s dog, Fletcher.  They discover that Fletcher loves pizza so much that he gives a spectacular howl when they offer him some.  They make Fletcher and his wonderful howl part of their act.

When they audition for the station, the put on dog ear costumes to match Fletcher’s ears and call themselves Fletcher and the Gang.  The people at the station love their act, especially Fletcher’s howl, and they are accepted onto the program.

However, shortly afterward, Fletcher disappears.  They search everywhere for him and put up posters, but no luck.  Jill is convinced that Fletcher must have been abducted because he would never run away.  It turns out to be true, and they discover it for sure when they get a phone call telling them where to find Fletcher.

SQRockPic2Fletcher is all right, but now, he suddenly hates pizza!  It seems that Fletcher’s abductor fed him nothing but pizza until he started to hate it.  Did someone do that on purpose to ruin their act for the contest?  How would this person have even known about their act?  Also, what can they do about the contest now that Fletcher is more likely to run from the sight of pizza than howl for it?

The other rock bands in the contest are all hilarious with themes that include spiders, potatoes, mummies, and clowns.

The book also includes the music and lyrics for the kids’ rock song about Fletcher: “Hungry All the Time.”

It is part of the Something Queer Mysteries.

Triple Trouble in Hollywood

TripleTroubleHollywoodTriple Trouble in Hollywood by Michael J. Pellowski, 1989.

This time, Randi and Sandi to go Hollywood to visit their cousin Mandy. Mandy is no longer the same snobbish girl that she was the last time they were together, but she still has ambitions. Right now, she’s trying out for a part in a commercial, but she’s up against some stiff competition.

The commercial requires the girl to sing a jingle and do a back flip. Although Mandy has an excellent speaking voice, the other girls know that she’s terrible at singing, and Mandy doesn’t think she can do the back flip, either. Her main competitor, Tara, can do both of those things. Tara is a wealthy girl whose parents hired coaches to teach her singing and gymnastics especially for this role.

The three girls don’t think it’s fair that Tara has such advantages, and she’s an even bigger snob than Mandy ever was. Then, Randi suggests that they use their similar appearances once again to turn the situation around. Randi is athletic enough to do a back flip, and Sandi is an excellent singer. With all three of them working together, the try-outs for the commercial would be a snap!

TripleTroubleHollywoodPicSandi doesn’t want to do it because it would be dishonest, but Randi and Mandy talk her into it. It’s partly to help Mandy, partly to get back at Tara for her rotten attitude, and partly for the chance to meet the heartthrob Judd Morrison who will also be in the commercial. Of course, as is always the case when the girls switch places, nothing goes as planned.  But, to the girls’ surprise, their younger brother Teddy helps to make things better in the end.

This is part of the Double Trouble Series.

The book is currently available through Internet Archive.